johnfn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shadow Steps]

WOW THIS MAY BE MY FAVORITE NGADM TR hold on my caps lock was stuck sorry but yeah this might be my favorite ngadm track. really really good even keeping in mind your excellent track history.

DEM0NW0LF responds:

That caps lock key sure is on a hair-trigger, huh

[toil]

i like the direction you are going in

which is to say i like moody pianos

probably one of my favorite NGADM pieces i've heard so far if not my favorite. JUST FIX THE MIX

midimachine responds:

i might have time to fix it tomorrow, fingers crossed :v
(update: i fixed it)

[Peachymaiden & Javier Anibarro Z - Hidden Lines (Original)]

Wow great job! Your mixing has gotten better and your composition is still amazing. :D

Jabicho responds:

Hi man! Thanks so much, it means a lot :D

[Reveries]

make vocals louder. also try drying up the mix a little in the verse sections. other than that, another really nice piece! i guess 1f1n1ty vs you is like the battle of the round by the audition round so all eyes are on you guys... seems pretty close to me ;-)

bassfiddlejones responds:

Why don't you make YOUR vocals louder johnfn??? lol I will stop by and listen to your tune soon as well, thanks for the review

[Seres]

i really respect your transitions

and sound design

and arps.

uh but im not sure if you can just paste a section from the beginning into the end and say "ha ha its coherent now!!" i dont think that works outside of a contest =p

P.S. unexpected homestuck at 1:58 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j8GVlwRrXC8

Onefin responds:

I made a full circle in key changes so I slapped a part from the beginning at the end there :P

And like I said in the description I don't think coherence was a thing that existed too much

so whoops

[A Little Older, A Little Wiser]

amazing vibe. if the mix was a little better this would be even more amazing somehow.

larrynachos responds:

Hey john, if you have some time, do you think you could go a little more in depth as to what I could have done with the mix? I really didn't do anything extravagant for it, but I'm sure some of the levels are off.

Thank you for the review!

[-Starfight-]

pretty fun, sounds a lot like waterflame when the vocals come in.

you should really spend more than 10 hours on it though. i can tell =p

Preds responds:

It does? Lol ty, I should have spent more time on this, but I have proyects and collabs going on so, this was all I could do for now :)

[Mi Pasion]

Great composition but the trumpet samples are so terrible it's actually offensive to me. please fix them so you can stop offending me. :)

AzulJazz responds:

Honestly, I was never satisfied with the sound of the brass, even though I was looking to improve it with equalization and other processes, I never think about changing the samples, wich would probably be the best solution.

Now I want to change the samples, but I alredy sent the song for a contest, and Im not sure if thats allowed.

Thanks for your comments, and sorry for the offense and for my bad english. :)

[Last Will]

Pretty awesome stuff! I enjoyed your main melodies (also how did you do this in 2 days lol) Just needs a little better mixing. Also you should change to a different type of ending before Skye reduces your score by 5.0 like he did one time for me a few years ago.

;-)

NahuPyrope responds:

It's actually the first time I used that kind of ending!, I thought it fits because it could actually keep going on forever!.

Thanks so much for the review!, I don't think I'll change it tho, what's done it's done xD

[Red Light Syndrome (Original)]

yay im glad you guys made it into the ngadm you are some of my favorite musicians (though this isnt even my favorite song by you!). of course you are against midimachine who is another one of my faves so thats kind of a bummer lol but im looking forward to hear what you make : )

don't forget to spend some time mixing! gogo!

Jabicho responds:

Hi Johnfn! Thanks so much for your support! :D ahaha, yes! mixing is super important

I've heard midimachine's music, and he's awesome! so it's gonna be a great competition.
Thanks again for your words! :D