johnfn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slowing Down]

real talk something funky happens when you sing and your songs are not as catchy as your other songs that dont have your singing.

you're getting closer tho

really amazing track. also how is it possible to mix so well? HOW IS IT POSSIBLE?!?

also that kick stutter section

also that festival section rofl

ALWAYS A FAN BB

garlagan responds:

john... there's no one singing, you're tripping on synthesizers

[Gravity Slam]

cool riffs, tho i'm not super sold on the harmonies.

this is a cool song, but i feel like the melodies could have been more effective somehow? like more catchy or riffy or headbangy? shrug i dunno. good stuff tho

TSRBand responds:

Thanks for the review! Definitely need to start tidying up those harmonies, will keep at it!

[Tale Of A Scion]

I really love the first section with the tinkly piano and moody strings. i'm not super sold about the super loud snare in the third section.

lots of great ideas in here. mostly a better mix would help i think!

Tolanmusic responds:

Thanks man! This is my first time ever mixing/mastering a song on my own, so it has been its own beast. I've learned a ton though in these couple weeks and now with the deadline extension, hopefully I can clean it up some more :)

[Ravenholt]

wow realllly good melody! great progression, but yea, variation on the progression is really whats needed here.

excellent track tho.

KamillasRainbow responds:

Thanks! And yeah that's usually my biggest problem with my music.

[Codename: Tom Selleck (NGADM '17)]

aha, some metal in the ngadm! good stufffffffffff. i think the melodies could be a little better - they arent bad, but they aren't super compelling either.

JDawg00100 responds:

Thanks for the review :)

[[0003-DCOF] 血祭]

ah bummer about your recording problems! this is a nice start to a track... just needs more. =p

DwightFalcon responds:

Thanks a lot :)

[Neurobop]

wow cant wait for you to meet up with demon-wolf ;-)

pretty amazing sound design with the bass and great mix, but i dont think that the sax fits all so well. it might be a mixing thing, it seems out of tune at some points tho. (2:09)

5TanLey responds:

thanks, dunno about that sax, sound totally in tune to me

[Deadshot Desperado]

danng that section at 1:45 with the swelling strings!

also that really cool melody solo thing!

this track is really neato. =D just needs a better mix ;_;

ConnorGrail responds:

I've gotta agree on the mix portion, oh well such is life. maybe I'll be able to spend more time on the next one :O
In any case, glad you enjoyed

[Quirky Quest]

fun super uplifting dub steppy electronic! i think the mix could be a bit better to accentuate your cool rhythm work during the drop sections but i like this track!

MrKoolTrix responds:

Thanks for reviewing! :)

[Hidden Tension]

another awesome song. this has a great vibe to it. the little melody that comes out at 2:14 is great and could have been emphasized even more.

McGorilla42 responds:

Thanks for yet another kind comment, Mr Johnfn! :)