johnfn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gravity Slam]

cool riffs, tho i'm not super sold on the harmonies.

this is a cool song, but i feel like the melodies could have been more effective somehow? like more catchy or riffy or headbangy? shrug i dunno. good stuff tho

TSRBand responds:

Thanks for the review! Definitely need to start tidying up those harmonies, will keep at it!

[Ravenholt]

wow realllly good melody! great progression, but yea, variation on the progression is really whats needed here.

excellent track tho.

SmallTownRook responds:

Thanks! And yeah that's usually my biggest problem with my music.

[Codename: Tom Selleck (NGADM '17)]

aha, some metal in the ngadm! good stufffffffffff. i think the melodies could be a little better - they arent bad, but they aren't super compelling either.

JDawg00100 responds:

Thanks for the review :)

[[0003-DCOF] 血祭]

ah bummer about your recording problems! this is a nice start to a track... just needs more. =p

DwightFalcon responds:

Thanks a lot :)

[Neurobop]

wow cant wait for you to meet up with demon-wolf ;-)

pretty amazing sound design with the bass and great mix, but i dont think that the sax fits all so well. it might be a mixing thing, it seems out of tune at some points tho. (2:09)

5TanLey responds:

thanks, dunno about that sax, sound totally in tune to me

[Deadshot Desperado]

danng that section at 1:45 with the swelling strings!

also that really cool melody solo thing!

this track is really neato. =D just needs a better mix ;_;

ConnorGrail responds:

I've gotta agree on the mix portion, oh well such is life. maybe I'll be able to spend more time on the next one :O
In any case, glad you enjoyed

[Quirky Quest]

fun super uplifting dub steppy electronic! i think the mix could be a bit better to accentuate your cool rhythm work during the drop sections but i like this track!

MrKoolTrix responds:

Thanks for reviewing! :)

[Hidden Tension]

another awesome song. this has a great vibe to it. the little melody that comes out at 2:14 is great and could have been emphasized even more.

McGorilla42 responds:

Thanks for yet another kind comment, Mr Johnfn! :)

[Kids]

this is absolutely incredible. amazing melody, amazing production, amazing everything.

i was listening to the tracks from the top scoring auditions, but then my friend sent me this one and it is honestly better than almost all of them.

you killed it.

McGorilla42 responds:

I'm...I'm almost speechless. Those words coming from you, johnfn, mean so much to me and it's lit a fire under my butt to get cracking on a new song, whether I make it through to the next round or not. I'm so happy to have seen this. Thanks so much and I'll try to make the next one even better!