another excellent trax - a great switch up from your previous style, but the two could fit very nice on the same album =)
one feedbacks: i wish i heard the sighing 1:25 passage again.
another excellent trax - a great switch up from your previous style, but the two could fit very nice on the same album =)
one feedbacks: i wish i heard the sighing 1:25 passage again.
Thanks, John! I was back and forth on whether or not I should include that in the second verse and ultimately decided to leave it out to give it some more space, but maybe I should've left it. Funny that you brought it up because I thought about it a lot. Good luck this round! Next song will be even DIFFERENTER
2:30 best thing
<3 thought that title was reserved for you
TRAX OF THE ROUND BB
I AM CALLING IT NOW
HOLY
joooooooooooooooohhhhhhn
WANNA BET?
GOOD TRAX FINN
great outro thing
very intimidating work i think =D
Ahaha that's me, intimidating as hell
> solo instrument
> actually has 2 instruments
hehe
great trax though!!!!
such a great melody at 1:58 and earlier in the trax... so fun and carefree =D
i wish you would have humanized your piano a little.
this is awesome.
Whoops, I forgot it has a percussion.
Any tips to humanize the piano more? One of my problems is understanding the note placement according to the real hand position, because I have zero experience on playing a real piano or synth. :(
At least the composition is good enough, I think. Thanks for the review!
nice trax u 2!!! great sound designnn =D gl!
=== This is an NGUAC Audition Round Review ===
Thoughts I had while listening to your piece:
- the quality of that vocal sample is amazing. Where did you get it?
- the drops are really impressive, but eventually become too repetitive. this is your biggest downfall; this piece would have been AMAZING with less repetition.
- that little highpitched vocal thing in the drops is amazing, but repeated too much.
- the solo at 2:10 is too obviously quantized.
- the second drop should have more variation rather than sounding a lot like the first.
Mixing: 4/4
Arrangement: 2/4
Composition: 3+/4
Sound Design/Quality: 4/4
Overall (see here for how to improve: http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/989515): 8.5/10
the ending of this track (last 1.5 minutes) is absolutely beautiful. if you would have focused on that rather than the cinematic stuff (which is okay but not as good) i think this would have been super awesome. as it is, it's still pretty awesome.
ugh this is really good but the vocal treatment bothers me, it seems like you did some sort of funky vocal processing that makes them sound weird! other than that, it's great - the acoustic guitar, the melodies, there's lots to like!
Oh, I treated the crap out of the vocals. I wanted to sounds slightly...off. Not quite human. There was a reason for it!
Hopefully it didn't work too far out of my favour!
dang, epic song! its a bit of bad luck you're up against papkee IMHO, you would have a much easier time up against almost anyone else in this section of the bracket. great stuff tho, really intense cinematic work =D
Thanks for the review! I'm interested in seeing what the judges have to say for both of our tracks! 8D
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