not bad, just too short
As you can see what everyone is complaning about is that this is too short. make it longer,(and you might want to add sound effects) but it was done pretty well. You know how to use flash better then most people here on NG. just make it a little longer. Oh and one more thing. Audio compression is what you need, VERY BADLY. check this NG site: http://www.newgrounds.com/flash/audio.html
I hope i dont get banned by some dumb bot who sees that webpage as an ad :///.