Really good.
The instrumentation is so beautiful and so well rendered. You have truly mastered your craft, especially in comparison with the old version. And that melody, wow. At first I thought it was only decent, but the way that the second half compliments the first half, just excellent. And it stays very close to the center note (about an octave), which is technically impressive too...
The only criticism I can think of is that you used the I-IV-V chord progression, which is kind of tired by this point, but I don't even care.