=== This is an NGADM Round 2 Review ===
Alright, I just have to get this out of the way. About a year ago I wrote a song which I liked a lot, although I never made it into a full song. The reason I bring it up is that the main melody of that song has 8 notes that are, NOTE TO NOTE AND RHYTHMICALLY EXACTLY THE SAME as your main melody. It's a particularly bizarre experience to judge a track when the main theme is something that I also wrote. Do I award full points for LITERALLY BEING ME? Or 0 points for COPYING MY SUBCONSCIOUS?!?
I might actually be underrating this song because I've heard the melody already, so it doesn't have that novelty to it! Like I said... it's super weird.
Alright, let me settle down.
This is a really, really good track. The first thing that catches my attention is, obviously, the mix. It's just so darn well done. It makes me mad! Aside from some small nitpicks, which I'll get into eventually, the mix is insanely well done, and definitely the most satisfyingly full mix that I've heard this round on the NGADM. Way to go.
Not only does this song have a (generally) awesome mix, but it seems like it's just full of things for judges like me to geek out on. I'll just have a quick go at them, here we go.
The main piano theme. Again, this is the exact theme that I came up with once, so it's kind of weird for me to judge it, but yeah, I'm pretty sure it's good. :P
The transition at 1:05. Actually, that transition REALLY caught me aback the first time I listened to it, and I wasn't really totally sold on it, and I'm still not sure if I am (it doesn't really raise tension as you'd expect it to so much as it makes you go "what the heck is happening" - I think it would have been better if the guitar had a more clear ascent to the final note rather than going around in circles and then finally hitting it). I have to say though, I haven't heard anything quite so insane in a while, so that's something.
The 5/4 section. Every judge likes prime number time sigs over 4 that are greater than 3, and you musicians have apparently caught onto this secret in the second round of NGADM. Your 5/4 riffing is effortless.
The peak of the guitar solo at 3:08 (I actually wanted to hear it go up higher more, but this is still an awesome moment).
Anyways, so I clearly think that this song is awesome. So why the low score? Actually, 8.5 isn't a low score at all. It's the second highest score I gave! Why did you think it was a low score, anyways? Well, I should probably complain about some stuff, to give you a direction to improve. So here we go.
I do think that the mixing is off at points. Again, the mix is awesomely full, so that's definitely not where the problem - it's I think that the drums are too quiet. If you compare with professional tracks done in the same vein, I think you'll find that drums in this sort of driving orchestral rock hybrid track are much louder, to really give energy to the track. I would also expect the drums to be slightly bassier.
The mix does become a little cluttered at points, as well, just because there's so darn much stuff in it. Consider 2:00, where the guitar is kinda competing with the pad, and the midbass guitar seems to just be completely drowned out. Or at 2:32, where the first few notes of the piano are almost completely impossible to hear (this is minor, since we all know what those notes are by now, but still).
I also want to talk a little about transitions. I already kinda expressed my confusion over the transition at 1:05, which I think is kinda emblematic of my problems with transitions generally in this piece. A really good transition into an energetic part should be gearing you up to go HECK YEAH by the time that the next section kicks in. One of my favorite transitions is the one that starts at 3:02 in the song "The Good Life" by Weezer (listen to the whole song to get the full impact). It certainly doesn't hurt that the song is just generally amazing, but that transition back into the chorus is *so* good that even if Weezer had decided to make the final chorus a reprise of Humpty Dumpty it STILL would have been awesome, just by virtue of the incredible transition.
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gkroIXktjgE
This is the kind of thing that I wanted from your track, especially the transition into the final chorus (which should always be the biggest hitting moment, since it's at the end of the song anyways!). I mean, just think of how awesome 2:53 in your track could have been with the right sort of transition.
Aside from the buildup transitions, I felt like some of the other transitions were a little weird as well, in a more minor way. For example, the transition at 1:31 (No, Microsoft Word, I did not misspell "1:31". That doesn't even make sense.) - that awesome midbass riffing just sorta... fades out? That's kind of disappointing. Similarly with 2:09, I felt like it was kind of a let down, since a modulation should usually be a BIG DEAL, but instead you just hit a couple of very quiet brass notes and then BOOM.
Anyways, I know I complained a lot here but, all in all, this was an awesome track. Well done, you guys. It was one of my favorites from the round.
Score: 8.5