johnfn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Space In Your Eyes (Master)]

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

OMG. This is AMAZING. Wow! WOW! This is a friggin great psych rock song. It’s got all the trippy elements of psych rock, and then it actually goes even further by being super varied, having a ton of different, equally compelling sections. Your vocals are awesome - they are really reminiscent of Tame Impala, a great band - and the mix is pretty darn good as well. This was my favorite audition piece. Score: 10

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 4/4
* Arrangement: 4/4
* Mixing: 4/4

fearing responds:

Hi John!

First of all thank you for your review and taking your time to listen and write this out. I'm really really happy that you enjoyed it, let alone say it's your favourite. That's amazing!
Also, I was happy to read your comparison to Tame Impala, I've been listening to them a lot lately, so that's a huge compliment.

Cheers again buddy, your reviews are great.

Jevon

[Kite (Original Overhaul Mix)]

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

Dang! Melodic trance is always really fun, and this just checks all the boxes. The mix is fantastic. It’s very very well arranged and varied - there are many sections that work very well together, and the breakdowns are just as interesting and well thought out as the climaxes (which is very rare to see in edm!). If I were to complain, I’d say that the main melody at 2:16 could be better - but thats just because the rest of this song is so lovely that I had very high expectations! You did great here. Score: 9

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 3/4
* Arrangement: 4/4
* Mixing: 4/4

D-Chain responds:

Thanks a bunch johnfn!! much appreciated!

[The City's Ghosts (Original)]

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

WOW. Let me say that again: WOW. Let's get this out of the way quickly - the mixing here is terrible - it's often muddled in climaxes, and it's even clipping at points. But omg - the vocals are out of this world, the composition is amazing, the arrangement is perfect. The rapidfire delivery of vocals at points is just perfect (I strongly disagree with the previous reviewers here), and I love how the piano and strings back it up. The composition and arrangement are so good, in fact, that I *still* gave this a ridiculously high score, even though the mixing is so obviously flawed. I won't be so kind in future rounds - so be sure to clean up your mix. (Hint: Less elements are easier to mix. Also, make those vocals louder in genera, but make sure they never clip! I have 2 guides to mixing in my link below, and I'd highly recommend you to check them out :-)) One of my favorite audition pieces. Score: 9.5

Mini-scores (Note: See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)

* Mixing: 1/4
* Composition: 4+/4
* Arrangement: 4/4

Jabicho responds:

Thank you so much, johnfn!
I was very happy to read your review, and I appreciate a lot the help you gave us with the mixing, we're gonna work hard on it, and improve it for our next piece :D
I'll check out your mixing guides too :)
Thanks again, for your help, your words, the score and mini scores, the review, everything, it means a lot

[Children of Gravity]

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

Holy crap! This is easily the most ambitious piece of the round (though I'd keep an eye out for Birdinator and TylerSchrader). It goes ALL OVER THE PLACE, from a 2 minute orchestral opening that reminds me a lot of some of the old SimCity music to INSANE HEAVY METAL RIFFING to chill breakdowns, but it all sounds very coherent. The transitions never jarred me or took me by (unpleasant) surprise. So that is all very impressive. However, the ambition of this piece is also the biggest flaw. Since the piece is so long, there are points where the mix deteriorates (though, admittedly, for 90%+ of the song, the mix is solid). The biggest problem, though, is the composition: the melodies seem to be pretty random, and I probably would have difficulty remembering one after the song was over. Still, though, this piece is pretty darn impressive. Score: 8.0

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 2/4
* Arrangement: 3/4
* Mixing: 3/4

Crueldeity responds:

Wow thank you sir! I will try to work on melody cohesion more as my work progresses. I do thank you for the incredible depth of review for my song. This type of feedback is very helpful for really honing my sound. Thanks Johnfn! \m/

[Horizons]

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

Wow, this piece! You are an awesome singer and an awesome guitarist, and I am really impressed by the professional quality of the mix and playing. Though for some reason I am having trouble getting into this piece as much as I would expect. The arrangement, the transitions - all of the pieces are very well done, it's just that the composition is not exactly as good as I'd expect. It's still very good, though, mind you! So keep it up - can't wait to hear more from you in the future.

Mini-scores (Note: See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Mixing: 4/4
* Composition: 3/4
* Arrangement: 4/4

[Space Dreams]

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

Wow! The mix here is just…wow! It’s so good! You did a really friggin good job. When that first drop kicked in I was really taken aback. The kick is so loud and everything. :D The sound design is pretty good, as well, but what is really missing here is a really solid melody or riff that I can really latch onto. Most of the song doesn’t have a melody at all (outside from the plucks I suppose), and I feel like the melody in the ‘chorus’ could be stronger. So, a pretty darn well mixed song, but it needs a little more to stand out. Score: 7

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 2/4
* Arrangement: 3/4
* Mixing: 4+/4

[Chasing the Wind]

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

Oh gosh, the melodies are so nice!!! The sound design is holding you back here, i think - that one thing that sounds like an accordion is just terrible sounding (i think Steampianist is the only person in the history of the world to make edirol sound good). but ugh! it's such a happy nice piece! If this piece wasn’t so short (and looped), it may have even scored higher. But I mean, dang. This song makes me happy. One of my favorites of the audition round. 9.5

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 4+/4
* Arrangement: 3/4
* Mixing: 4/4

[Got Home]

Argh, solo piano! Jazz chords! Lazy sunday vibe! My one true weakness! This song starts out fantastic, but right at the :25, it suddenly slows down and the melodies fail to resolve in a satisfying way and it starts sounding random. I don’t think that it *is* random, but something about the arrangement is not letting me really get into the second half of this song. It almost sounds like you forgot what you were going to play for a little bit! This song has a lot of really nice aspects to it - great chords and progression, a beautiful vibe, and some really nice melodic sections, but it needs a little tightening up to be excellent. Score: 7.5

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 3+/4
* Arrangement: 2/4
* Mixing: n/a

Noisysundae responds:

This is my essential expectation everytime I send something to the contest. I admit that I had no idea what should I do on the second half. (I definitely going to read your post now!) I usually do my musics in both opposite polars - Go full mix or empty solo piano like this. XD
Followed, faved some of yours, and looking forward to your future release and review. Hopefully, you will leave a review another one if you have some time because I'm more into making electronics than classics. However, I still love to do both. This review was a blast even if it wasn't for the sake of NGAUC! Thanks a hell lot!!!!!1111 :D

[OVus2]

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

This piece is weird as heck (not a bad thing!) and super hard to judge. The mixing is great and I love the drum loop - but then again, that's all it is - a loop. You could at least have chopped it up and varied it a little. :P The vocals are a great touch, but the song kinda drifts around without any meaning other than that drum loop. Score: 7.5

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 2/4
* Arrangement: 3/4
* Mixing: 3/4

Mabelma responds:

Thank you so much for the feedback, I truly do appreciate it. I'll keep those things in mind for the next track :)

[Odyssey]

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

MAN. Now this right here sounds like Homestuck music. Which is good, because I love homestuck music. :) (For example, see: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ktuDYYtbs2s) One thing that you make use of which I particularly like is the ii -> V. It works really nicely in a minor context! If I were to critique, I’d say that the song is a bit repetitive towards the end - it needs some sort of structural variation. I’d also say that that buzzy bass thing in the background is just pointless, and the song would be way better without it. On the positive side, the drums are great! I think they could be a little louder, but they have just the right amount of grittiness. Very good work overall. Score: 8.5

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 3+/4
* Arrangement: 2/4
* Mixing: 3/4

LunyAlex responds:

Hey! Thank you very much for the review. Sorry for the late reply; been immensely busy lately.

Very glad you liked the song overall and I'll take heed of the critique.

Cheers!