johnfn's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Box Ball: Multi Play]

I'd say 98% of us can't play mutliplayer

I know it feels like your selling out but you have to make a multiplater option or people like me just wont get anything out of it. I hope you do for our sake.

dreamers responds:

dude, read my comments next time...

[-:Buttons Tutorial:- 2]

Problems

There were no back buttons. Your on(press) code actionscript doesn't work (And I'm not a noob so don't call me one, I know how to fix it). Last and most importantly, you didn't give enough description to anything. You just said do this, do this. Add more. Thanks.

DragonFruit-Rock responds:

I might.

[Shoot A Raccoon]

It's okay

The thing that bothered me was how fast they dissapeared. I barely had enough time to realize they were there in the first place and then they're gone again. I think you should make it slower or something.

And really, make something more original next time... I've seen these things millions of times.

[Halo Quiz Game]

Kinda funny

I liked it. It was a little to short to be great but still kinda funny. Graphics, although mostly stolen (with permission), were good. And the music pwnt! ^_^ <- anime smiley face of doom.

Al6200 responds:

Good, thanks for liking it. The art was good, I do agree, but calling it stolen is a little bit misleading, as its really the artist who gets free advertising and the flash artist who gets good gfx. Glad you liked it.

[battle grounds]

Pretty cool

The thing that bothered me was that I got touched and was sent back to the beginning. That just sort of ruins it for me.

Luckily for you, I had already voted 5 before that happened.

Also, I'm sure you're going to hate me for saying this because the movement system musta taken a while to put together, but I didn't like it, it was too cumbersome to click like a million times to go places.

But all in all, that was pretty cool, I'll watch out for more stuff from you.

reelbigcheese responds:

thanks for the long review XD and thanks for the 5 lol

[Helicopter Attack]

Sorry for the blam

But after a certain point, the game just got so laggy it was impossible to go on. If you fix this (try deleting onclipevents and stuff like that) I'd vote a 4 or 5 for ye.

[The Ultimate Quiz Game]

Not bad

It wasn't uber or bad. The random humor made me chuckle at times (mainly the thing about Dune where it said "what does this have to do with glue" and then when you clicked it it said "also not a real choice")

Graphics: Well most of them aren't yours, and text really doesn't count as graphics.

Style: Humor gave it a little style.

Sound: Is that my music I hear? PERFECT TEN!! ^^

Violence: Well. There was none.

Interactivity: wasn't super complex, but still good.

Humor: Mentioned above.

Overall: It aint bad. It isn't pwnage, at least not yet, because the answers to the questions can be improved, and interactment could be enhanced too (how about a custom cursor? Maybe something that says NO NOT THAT ONE when you mouse over something? I derno)

Keep workin' on the flash though.

Al6200 responds:

Yeah, thanks for the review. I posted this response pretty recently, so you know how much my flash skills have improved.

The humor is pretty cheap in hindsight, but I'm glad you got a little out of it.

The graphics pwnzor, no idea why you would think otherwise. Especially the high quality 3D spinning balls of no relevance.

I suppose the humor gave it some style

Yeah, the code had only a handful of simple variables. But it felt pretty cool when I made it.

Yep, I have continued to work on Flash (as you cleary know).

[The Maze Game]

Perfect winner of underdog.

I think for the first level, NOTHING should be a wall, so you can get the general idea, because I died about 10 times before i realized what was going on. Good game, you need to work on it a little bit but it is fun. One thing is that some of the collision in those tight little places is wrong or just plain too hard and it really aggrivates me. But good game anyways.

[Robot Monkey City]

Im suprised this is so high

Its kind of...random, but thats ok, we still like it :P I just had to review after hearing the foster music, I LOVE THAT SHOW!! I think there should be some more meaningless destruction, like maybe destroying those big buildings and having them crush stuff. And maybe a view of like a highway of those wierd robot cars. Then maybe you could click on one and control it, and then have it wreck into other cars and cause like a whole traffic backup... (I like meaningless violence)

Nocturnal-Devil responds:

controlling one of the cars on a highway s a great idea. so is creating the traffic block. maybe i'll make it so that you can either play it as avoiding the other cars or hit then if you like to create a traffic blockage. good idea. thanks for the comment :)

[Escape the pixels 2.0]

Not bad but not great

It was a pretty good game, but it could do with a few tweaks. First of all, every time i went off the screen, my points went down. Way down. Is that supposed to happen? (you might want to have it so that when you hit the right side, you come around on the left side)

Second, i think you should get bonuses after like 1000 points, 5000 points, 10000 points and so on. You know, like destroy all red bricks, ect.

Another thing that was a little annoying was that the blue pixel would always appear on the side of the screen, where red blocks would randomly appear. You might want to have like a warning system or something to show when red blocks are supposed to come.

Anyways in conclusion this is a pretty good game. May you be able to write even better ones! :)