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johnfn

Age/Gender: n/a, Male
Job: MD

I am currently working on an episodic RPG. I'm open for opinions and thoughts.

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Score: 7
Murshaq

"Okay, but I hated the ending."

submission: Murshaq
date: September 11, 2006

Seriously, did you have to end it with that awful singing? No offense to whoever sang it, but it just didn't go with anything at all. It was doing so great up until that point. It almost redeemed itself with the guy playing his lawnmower, but... ugh :P

I tried to score you as if I hadn't seen that part.

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Score: 7
The Holy Defender [1]

"Looking pretty good."

date: September 11, 2006

The only thing I would suggest for you is to improve your lip-syncing skills. Other than that, your graphics look great. Story seems good. Voice acting - mainly of the evil guys - needs a little work. I would complain about how it was so short, except that I noticed that it was already 4mb and there's not a lot you can do about that.

Author's Response:

thanks for the review. yes im rather new to lipsynch, i would have tried other mouth possitions, but time was of the essence. :)

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Score: 8
The missing brownies

"Looking great."

date: September 10, 2006

Good animation here. My only suggestion is to have subtitles, and have it run a little bit longer - maybe when you finish part 2 you can compile both into 1 big flash.

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Score: 7
Hungry Space 2

"Good."

submission: Hungry Space 2
date: September 9, 2006

But I docked a point because it's basically just Fishy (a different Flash game) with powerups. Can't you be just a little more original? Also, I remember reading that spacebar was a fireball, but all it seemed to do was pause the game.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the sincere review.

About the controls, it depends on what player you're playing as. Double check with the instructions and let me know if the problem still persists.

Thanks for playing the game :)

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Score: 8
DashDingo's tutoreuhl

"I love your humor."

date: September 9, 2006

Good tutorial. Although it didn't cover a lot, and it was only marginally better in explaining AS then a copy and paste tutorial (I would have covered all of the statements in the code beforehand, but that's just me) it was definitely pretty funny. I'd like to see some more stuff from you in this vein of humor.

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Score: 8
On Water

"Probably the best thing I've seen today."

submission: On Water
date: September 9, 2006

I loved the style, it worked so perfectly with the animation. You must tell me how you got it to work with the computer. I throughly enjoyed this animation, good job, and I predict its going to win some sort of award.

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Score: 8
romeo and juliet in cs

"What a unique concept."

date: September 9, 2006

I loved the execution of this. The translation from Shakespearian language to CS was very well done and certainly provided some amusement. I think I would have given you a 9 (which is a really good score from me) if you would have had some voice acting. Other then that though, it was definitely an amusing flash.

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Score: 7
Drag The Dot

"Innovative."

submission: Drag The Dot
date: September 5, 2006

I loved all the different and unique ideas you have here. I certainly enjoyed playing this game, although it was frustrating at points. I got as far as level 11. I hope to see more games from you!

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Score: 2
Centauri Dress-Up! :D

"Sorry for the blam"

date: September 4, 2006

Resubmit this, and put a stop(); in the actions section of the frame with the dressup.

Author's Response:

Unforunately, I keep trying to do that and it's not working. ;-; This is awful!

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Score: 8
a picture is worth 1000..

"What a unique flash."

date: September 4, 2006

It was pretty good for a short. A clever and unique idea, with an amusing twist at the end. All in all good job here.

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